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Our poem

12 May

This is what our collaboration combined with our creative writing skills brought:

ACROSS THE MILES

OUR E-TWINNING POEM

Matteo's owl

Across the miles I fly,
but not too high in the sky,
to see all the views with my eyes!
With my wings I go on every day,
with my mind I will follow my way;
I’m looking for a friend …
It could be you! To the end.

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Across the miles I fly
but not too high in the sky
to see all problems with my eye!
With my hand I form the nature
for a better life in future
I’m looking for a friend to help today,
I’m looking for a friend to stay…

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Across the miles I send to you
and hope you send me something too,
through the sky that shines so blue
I will think about seeing you…

owl4           owl1

Across the miles I send
blog messages without an end
to share all the views with my words …
with our stories we share our day
with my mind I follow your way
In you I’ve found a friend …
Yes, it’s you! To the end.

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Across the miles a sound …
happy bells around …
they travel everywhere
and bring peace here and there …

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Across the miles I see
how many towns and trees!
Comparing them I f
ound
how lovely, living colours
has Europe on its ground!

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Across the miles I fly
And often stops by
To find a way to end up my day
Feathers flapping in the light of may
Looking for the best of friend

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Towards the infinite horizon to the end
Sun rising on days flowing smoothly
Across forests and seas I glide, swiftly
To the east, the south , the north… endlessly.

By teams: France, Germany, Italy

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27 Comments

Posted by on May 12, 2013 in Art, France, Friends, Germany, Italy, Poems, Travels

 

27 responses to “Our poem

  1. MrsU

    May 12, 2013 at 9:42 pm

    Across the miles to you we’d like to say ‘Thank you’ for making our day by arranging the poem that way. 🙂
    @French, German and Italian students ( arranged in aphabetical order, no ranking 😉 ) : You can really be proud of yourselves and your work on this blog. 🙂

     
  2. Eric Germany

    May 13, 2013 at 8:09 am

    This poem is really great!

     
  3. Giovanna

    May 13, 2013 at 12:06 pm

    @ team Germany: lovely words, thank you 😀 How good to make things together!

     
  4. Hugo France 6b

    May 13, 2013 at 12:16 pm

    It’s a beautiful poem. Great team work 😉

     
  5. Victor A - 6D FRANCE

    May 13, 2013 at 12:26 pm

    And here it is! Our poem is complete. Good Bye and see you soon owls. Ready for another flight 🙂

     
  6. Martin-France 6eB

    May 13, 2013 at 3:36 pm

    Beautiful poem.

     
  7. yoann6d france

    May 13, 2013 at 3:52 pm

    I love all of our drawings. Our collaborative poem is just beautiful 😉

     
  8. Emilia Germany

    May 13, 2013 at 5:12 pm

    It’s so great to see all our drawings in our etwinning poem. 🙂

     
  9. theo

    May 14, 2013 at 1:02 pm

    This poem is beautiful and imaginative designs and the owls are beautiful

     
  10. Dorine-France

    May 14, 2013 at 1:39 pm

    I love the poem and its drawings

     
  11. heloise 6e D France

    May 14, 2013 at 1:41 pm

    what a beautiful poem!! I want to say that you have imagination

     
  12. Merle Germany

    May 14, 2013 at 4:09 pm

    i like the poem, it`s great and the pictures too.

     
  13. Anna-Sophie Germany

    May 14, 2013 at 4:31 pm

    The owls are really beautiful and the poem too. I like it!!! 😛

     
  14. Teva 6eD-France

    May 15, 2013 at 11:27 am

    I prefer the total poem ! 😉

     
  15. marika57

    May 15, 2013 at 12:05 pm

    Great poem and great paintings!!!
    Bravo!!!

     
  16. Marie-France

    May 15, 2013 at 1:04 pm

    @ all partners.

    I was curious to check the definition of team-work in the dictionary 😉

    Here is what I found:

    ” Cooperative effort by the members of a group or team to achieve a common goal”

    ” Cooperative effort on the part of a group of persons acting together as a team or in the interests of a common cause”.

    Synonyms: collaboration, cooperation, coordination

    That’s exactly what we have been doing in producing this poem. Great common effort 😉

     
  17. axelle France6eB

    May 15, 2013 at 1:56 pm

    I love the poem we wrote even though I did not understand all of it 😉

     
  18. Bleuenn 6ème D -France.

    May 15, 2013 at 2:15 pm

    Very imaginative poem.

     
  19. Pauline Germany

    May 15, 2013 at 3:33 pm

    Wow these owls are beautiful : D

     
  20. Marine - France 6ème B

    May 15, 2013 at 5:50 pm

    I think we had a lot of imagination for this wonderful poem 😉

     
  21. Giovanna

    May 15, 2013 at 7:08 pm

    @ Marie-France: thanks for going into depth with words, they really mean what we did and are doing 🙂 !

     
  22. Julie-France 6D

    May 15, 2013 at 7:16 pm

    All our poems are great!
    They are very beautiful!

     
  23. Vincent Germany

    May 16, 2013 at 12:58 pm

    It´s cool that every country wrote something to create this poem.

     
  24. Josefine German

    May 18, 2013 at 1:41 pm

    The Poems are very nice

     
  25. Emilia German

    May 19, 2013 at 12:27 pm

    Oh this Poems are beautiful

     
  26. jasmin germany

    May 20, 2013 at 8:19 pm

    The pictures are great and the common poem is beautiful

     
  27. Philipp Germany

    May 22, 2013 at 3:05 pm

    The poem is really great and a little bit funny. Great Team work. I love it. 🙂

     

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